2 out of 6

      Today in class we read and graded an essay. We did this in preparation for the essays we are having to write. I have the person a 3/6, but the actual grade was a 2/6. I initially gave him a 4/6, but then i realized he was missing a few things. The writing was kind of hard to read, but we aren’t grading on penmanship.

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